More "It Came From My Notebook"

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There is a spider living underneath the staircase of my old and crooked house. She is nameless, a thin and ageless thing, having an octet of twisted and spindly limbs to move her from room to room.  The spider sees with one thousand hungry eyes like little black pearls, all in a row on either side of her face. Her hair is long and black, mouth wide with well-stretched lips made to swallow prey in one breath, jaws gaping, red and smeared with the dirt and blood.

She appeared one day, quite like spiders do, in the dry days between summer and fall. Shuffling first under the floorboards and crawlspaces of the front porch to find her way in, then into the corners and behind the shelves, and hiding from my line of sight. Until I crouched to her, held out a hand and told her, “Stay.” And so she did.

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Author: Magen Toole

Magen loves dinosaurs and black holes. She draws squids and writes stories about pretty boys who kiss each other. When she grows up she wants to play the tambourine in a psychedelic revival band.

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  1. OH.

    Whoaaa.

    I love the last bit, so much/

  2. Very amusing and interesting too :) I like your anecdote and I like your style of writing. The narrative in this story is not over-wordy and in the telling you drew this reader in with such clever usage. Excellently done. I award you my newly created (at this moment) “Words’ Worth Writing” award. :)

    It will not bring you monetary gain but if you see my pages you will see that I too am a ‘Wordsmith’ and I appreciate and value clever and interesting writing, wherever it may be found. In this regard you score highly. I’m glad I found your page. I’ll add you to my blogroll. I shall drop in again, to receive further pleasure in reading your posts.

    Thanks for sharing :)

    -poettraveler-

  3. re.. “Thank you for reading, and I’ll definitely look you up” …

    I’ll look forward to that – many thanks for your generous response.

    John
    – poettraveler -

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